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Post by singerboy on Mar 18, 2008 19:16:14 GMT -5
I love this poem. It's so true. People do hide from the real world in their fake smiles. The world is full of truth and lies, and I really think you make a good point with your poem. I love the stile of it as well. Plus, when I first read your title for your poem I looked at your smiley face ball advitar and somewhat snickered. Maybe that's a fake smile... or you're just happy like me!!!!!!!
ANYWAYS I loved loved loved the poem. ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Suerte on Mar 18, 2008 20:48:19 GMT -5
It indeed was interesting. The slight variation in stanza length was a nice touch to...now. If I could only get my portfolio back, I could teach you the sestina  |
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Post by Gypsy on Mar 19, 2008 17:18:08 GMT -5
i doubt i would ever be able to write one of those. i still dont know what that is XD
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Post by singerboy on Mar 20, 2008 12:14:44 GMT -5
Me either
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Post by Suerte on Mar 20, 2008 12:30:12 GMT -5
Its...amazing. And some of the most amazing things to read ever.
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Post by Gypsy on Mar 20, 2008 16:04:50 GMT -5
If you say so. Please write some more for us then.
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Post by singerboy on Mar 21, 2008 8:58:04 GMT -5
Yes, I want some more.
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