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Post by Gypsy on Jan 24, 2007 18:49:46 GMT -5
this is very interesting. i love how you have it set out. makes you wonder what exactly the man did to the girl.  very well written..and love the vocab. used. good job GypsY |
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Post by singerboy on Jan 26, 2007 13:26:48 GMT -5
THAT IS A GREAT POEM!!!!! I loved it! Amazing...Outstanding. It left me wanting to know what the guy did to the girl that made you want to KILL HIM. You tell me horror isn't your field, but wow! That would make an amazing horror story. My brain is still buzzing. It almost makes me want to kill somebody. LOL. GOOD POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [shadow=red,left,300]SINGERBOY [/shadow] |
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very well written..and love the vocab. used. good job
