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Post by singerboy on Feb 13, 2008 9:24:39 GMT -5
I just read your new poem and thought it was excellent. I especially love the first two lines, "Can you hear the winds of wild,Begging escape from every day?". Very good. I wish people at my school would submit poems like this to our Literary Magazine. Well anyways, Good Work. Can't wait to read your next one.
SINGERBOY
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Post by Suerte on Feb 13, 2008 14:57:45 GMT -5
Agreed. A superb poem. And yes I did just use the word superb. It's interesting, and while i admit I skimmed. Which is horrible of me to do, I'm on time-constraints. What i read was excellent.
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